(The number of emphasized syllables equals the number of permanent teeth. Sounds made in each particular region of the mouth are featured in their proper visual locations.)
The chopping blocks erupt
from pinkish gums
to cut
the flesh
that feeds.
These sleek
teeth
will dice
what once was life
and mash with square bones
to crush the older forms,
will rend with cusps
and cut
the meat
one needs,
now freed
by teeth
to cleave
to life anew,
compose a human mode.
Hi Bret,
I had to see the layout to appreciate it as a physical poem. I think that I have one physical poem in my collection which I will share with you at some future time. My “teeth” poems are at http://www.windriverdental.com under testimonials.
Happy writing, Cork
Cork, I enjoyed your orthodontic verse. Thanks for sharing. I would be interested to see the physical poem you mention if you get the chance to share it.
As for this poem, the jawline layout came out better in the physical book, but I think you can get the idea from here.